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i heard you coming
before the rusting wind chimes
before it could squeel
an array of boring rhymes

surfing the breeze
you're riding the wind
find me before morning
before the nights mist has thinned

a dark blade sings songs
of freed blood, of swift death
before you it happens
last beat, last breath

so leave for no more
do i fear. no more do i
breathe choking breaths that
fuel depressed thoughts

fat cells of thick blood
small packets of life
on march; red liquid armies
slide and dry down a knife

cold wind girl
pre-tomorrow's today
find me and finish
then take me away
©2005-2009 ~pyrotechnick
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Great piece and well written.
This is awesome!! Great rhyming. My favourite stanza:

a dark blade sings songs
of freed blood, of swift death
before you it happens
last beat, last breath

Beautiful. :heart:

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suck my kiss.
thankyou. yer i liked the way that last bit turned out. thanks again.

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you're just another one
no problem man, I like your work, very nice stuff you have
Emo emo! Nah nice one dude, it starts off kinda sarcastic but then turns serious. Wtf about devart killing our devwatching though.

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Narcissism.
wow. an approving comment on my poetry for once....thanks i suppose. i dunno. but its sad :(

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you're just another one
lovely poetic goodness mister kinsey

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